Story : a boy go explore a restricted island to free his childhood friend locked inside a castle
STORY
Isle / Beach
Girl : the boy go free his childhood friend locked inside a castle on the island
Island : the boys swims to a strange island
Beach : the boy wakes on the beach, after he stranded on the island
Forest / Tree
Forest : the boy goes deep into the island through a tall grass area
Trunk : in a glade he sees a lone kid, putting its arm into a tree trunk / hollow on the ground, as if looking for honey
Nectar : he then pulls out some blueish substance from the trunk hollow
Transform : the kid consumes this substance before turning into a monster
Jump : the creature chases the boy, making monstruous jumps
Cameras : there are cameras on this island, hidden in the trees and flowers
Beach / Monster
Monster : the boy ends up chased by a monster
Beach : the boy loses the creature, and finds himself on the beach
Tower : in distance we can see a tower within the island
Coffins : on the beach there are coffins locked with padlocks, containing children
Children : missing children would have ended up on this island, locked into coffin like boxes
Reeds : there is a reed field / reed bed near the beach, with tall plume like branches
Surf : in the water we can see kids playing and surfing
Attack : on of the kids is attacked / devoured by a crocodile like monster
Monsters : some dark scalled crocodile corpse like monsters, animated by a glowing blue substance
Monsters / Boy: the boy is being attacked by monsters from the water
Silhouette / Light : an entity of light ressembling a young girl comes to get the boy, saving him from the monsters, but taking him to another place
Stairs / Hole
Stairs : the silhouette takes the boy to a dark stairwell
Dark : stairwell descending into the depths of where ever this place is
Hag : the young silhouette takes the form of an old lady dressed in black
Seeress: this old lady would be known as the Seeress
Wish : the boy is looking to save someone dear to him, and to save them, the seeress grants him a wish
Sacrifice : the seeress grants him a wish, but in exchange of a sacrifice
Hole : they arrive down the stairwell, in front of a gaping chasm diving into the darkness
Fall : the old hag pushes the boy into the hole down the stairwell
Wake / Return
Wake / Body: the boy wakes on the beach, but with another body
Power : the boy’s body is filled with a strange power, like a flow running through his body
Wind : the boy would be animated by the storm, commanding wind and thunder, making obstacles fly, as well as flying into the air himself
Return : the boy returns on the island though the air
Flight : the boy rushes flying to the island, trying to reach the castle
Assault : the boy transforme starts assaulting the castle / complex
Gargoyles : monstruous flying creatures start swarming out of the castle, attacking the boy in the air
Castle / Core
Castle : the boy arrives to the ruined castle on top of the island
Monsters : the boy battles creatures outside and inside the castle
Girl / Free : the boy releases the girl imprisoned inside the complex
Changed : but she doesnt recognizes him, becaus of his appearance, transformed by this newfound power
Escape : the boy and the girl escape the castle
Separated : before being separated, the boy falls into the depths of the castle
Core / Reactor : the boy enters the heart of the complex / island, a sort of reactor, a massive machine ornated with decorations / talisman like runes
Earthquake : when an earth quake starts to break the walls around the place
Wall : a massive stone wall covered in symbols crumbls, revealing whats hidden inside the reactor
Dragon : between the cracks we can see the eye of a gigantic dragon
Fire : before a burning light irradiates the immense room
Explosion : the heart of the island explodes, taking the boy and the girl with the flames
NOTES
INFOS
Titles : The Forbidden Island
Infos : alt version of crystal island, using same elements
note : non developped / abandoned rewrite
dev : 2010 – 2015
Axem : plot imagined around lore of Axem and Mina ?
note : attempt to use elements from crystal island for axem lore
CHILDREN / MONSTERS
Boy / Axem ? : link with axem ?
Girl: the boy is looking for someone dear to him : Mina ?
Monsters : dark scalled crocodile corpse like monsters, animated by a glowing blue substance
Children : missing children would have ended up on this island, locked into coffin like boxes
Coffins : on the beach there are coffins locked with padlocks, containing children
SEERESS / WELL
Silhouette / Silhouette of light : entity of light who comes for the boy
Seeress : this would be the true form of the seeress ?
Seeress : old lady who can see the future
condition : at the condition the person sacrifices something precious / dear to them (object or being) they must throw into the well
existence : (they) learn the existence of the seeress on the contient / depart island
search : the boy was looking for the seeress from the start ?
Stairs of darkness : stairwell that descends into the depths of the earth (or where ever this place is)
Hole of the Seeress : well guarded by an old lady / hag who can see the future
Well : hole down the depths of darkness
Sacrifice : the boy would have sacrificed his memory and appearance, to obtain the power to save the one girl he loves
Body : the boy sacrificed his body / appearance
CASTLE / COMPLEX
Castle : castle on top of the island
Climate : the castle is an enormous machine controling the climate on the island
Gargoyles : monstruous flying creatures swarming out of the castle
Core / Reactor: heart of the complex / island, some kind of reactor
Ornated : large machine decorated with fiery ornaments / talismans
Dragon / Reactor : a dormant antique creature serving as the energy source of the reactor
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