A group of kids go explore a strange island.
STORY
RECALL V1
Beach
beach : a group of kids spends the day on the beach, among them theres a boy full of energy
isle : they learn about a forbidden island offshore, and decide to go explore it
boat : the group makes a raft or steals a (inflatable ?) boat and heads straight to the island
sea : on the way their boat get swept by the waves, the boy falls asea and loses consciousness
Isle
beach : the boy wakes on the beach, disoriented, a searches for his friends, their boat has dissapeared
kids : he finds some the of other kids, but their behavior is weird, they seem changed
sunbathers : a bunch of kids sunbathe on the beach, without worrying about those who had dissapeared
surfer : another one is surfing not far away
board : but when looking closely, hes not surfing on a board, but il ne surfe pas sur une planche, but on a crocodile like monster
hide : others are playing hide and seek in the woods
Search
search : the boy goes searching for the other missing kids
strange : things start to get real strange from this point
RETALE V1
Beach
Beach : the boy wakes up on the beach, with a group of friends who want to go on a island
Zone : this island is considered forbidden, or haunted, due to strange rumors
Boat : the groupe makes an improvised boat or raft, or stole a inflatable motor boat to go on the island
Sea
Separated : the group finds ittself at sea with their boat, mais se font séparés dans la tempête
Swim : after having lost track of his friends, the boy tries swim to the island
...
Isle
Beach : the boy wakes up on the beach, he stranded on the island
Search: the boy looks up on the beach seeking his mates possibly stranded too
Monster : when an marine monster, crocodile like and dark, emmerges from the sea roaming around the beach
Hide : the boy stays hidden, and heads to a wooded area
Forest
Forest : the boy starts going deeper within the forest on the island
Herbs : when a noise catches his attention, while hidding in tall grass
Survivors : apparently hes not alone, other survivors from the wreck stranded on the island
Trunk : then on the moment he sees one of his friends, standing near an hollow tree trunk on the ground
Sap : a blue glowing substance oozes from the trunk, like honey or sap
Contact : the dude touches this substance, as if absorbing it with his hand, before going away from the trunk
Strenght : he then flies into the air, leaping like crazy, before disappearing into the woods
Face : on his face an expression of horror, as if he wasnt human anymore
Left : once gone the hidden boy approaches the trunk to see its content
Void : but its gone, as if its once friend had absorbed all of it
...
Monster
Reedbed
Beach : then sounds start being heard near the beach
River : the boys walks down a small river or stream leading to seaside reedbed
Reeds : the boy hides again behind reeds near the water
Others : the boys sees two of his friends in the water
Fishing : the two kids are catching fish in the middle of the reedbed
Monster
Monster : when some kind of crocodilian / amphibian dragon, hidden within the reeds, starts roaming around in the same waters
Ambush : behind the two kids unaware, who didnt see the marine beast
Slingshot : the boy grabs his slingshot and fires at them, trying to warn them
Noise : while trying not to make any noise, as hes also close enough to get attacked as well
Massacre
Attack : one of them recieves a shot in the head, whose scream makes the beast jump out of the water, grabbing the other one, devouring it
Shot : the boy shoots a second stone on the first kid, only noticing his friend being eaten alive
Escape : the kid gets away across the water toward the beach to escape the beast
Chase : the creature starts chasing him, jaws covered in blood
Forest : to boy flees as well, losing the creature through the woods
...
Kids
Kids
Reunion : back on the beach, the boys ends finding the other kids
Changed : but their behavior seems changed
Observe : the boy keeps his distances, observing from afar
Surf
Surf : while approaching he sees one the kids surfing behind the rocks
Bully : being a bully hes got a grudge against, the boy slingshots a stone in his foot
Fall : the fat surfer kid then falls from his board, caught by the waves
Camp
Camp : the group of survivor somehow made a camp near the coast
Approach : but as the boy draws near the main gathering place
Light
Light : an intense light irradiates the sky, blinding all kids, even the boy
Transe : the kids start convulsing in an unspeakable transe, everything becomes fuzzy
Girl : from this light descends a silhouette in the shape of a little girl (or a old lady)
Take : and comes for the boy, blinded / stuned, and takes him away to another place
...
Darkness
Corridor
Corridor : the boy ends up along the girl walking inside a dark corridor, like a surreal underground
Gardian : she explains being the guardian of the island
Stairs : the leads the boy deep down an immense stairway, covered in thick mist
Punishment : the explains she cannot accept his crime (sin ?), and for that the boy must be punished
Crime : his crime would be having stepped on the island, or not having embraced its "influence"
Aging : the more stairs they walk down, the more the girl in white dress starts to look like an old lady in black shroud
Well
Well : they arrive down the botton of the endless stairwell, with a its end a hole / well of pure darkness
Will : "Do you have a last will ?" / "A last will my dear ?"
Push : she doesnt gives him time to speak / respond and pushes him into the well ; she pushes the boy into the hole down the stairwell
...
Return
Wake
Wake : the boy wakes up, on a country road, avoid of any presence
Body : with a new appearence, he wakes up with another body
Cross : walking to a crossroad, or a gas station, where cars can be seen
Way : he asks his way disoriented, the mind still foggy after his experience
Mad : the local people start to think hes crazy
Anger
Anger : the boy starts to be taken over by anger, while not knowing whats happening to him, nor what happened to his friends
Power : somehow he developped some kind of power ; making objects fly around in his wrath, as well as flying into the air himself
Coast : as he flies over the hills, and arrives near the coast, somehow he reappeared back on the continent
Flight : the boy then takes flight, and rushes over the sea to reach the island again
RETALE V2
Beach
Beach : the boy wakes up on the beach, with a group of friends who want to go on a island
Zone : this island is considered forbidden, or haunted, due to strange rumors
Boat : the groupe crafts an improvised boat or raft, or stole a inflatable motor boat to go on the island
Guards
Guards : the group gets caught by coast guards patrolling by
Boat : the guards conviscate their craft boat
Guards : the kids are kept by the guards who takes them near the sea
Cars : there are big black pickups on the bear, the kids get taken aboard the vehicules
Cars : the kids get taken aboard vehicles on the beach
Gas : before being smoked with sleeping gas, the group falls unconscious
...
Sea
Ship : the group wakes up on a large ship, with other kids they dont know
Privileged : apparently only certain kids from the group will be granted to go on the island
Game : the kids will take part in some kind of survival game
Supervisors : supervisors of the game, men in black serving as their jailers
Participants : they start to designate the participants of the game
Escape : the boy and his friends are finally alone, when they plan their escape
Locker : apparently their stuff got taken by the guards into a room full of lockers
Storm
Storm : the ship enters a stormy are
Sink : before hitting a reef and starts to sink
Panic : the group take their chance while panic onboard allow them to get their stuff, as well as the boat they crafted (wtf ?)
Locker : the group tries to break in the locker room
Padlocks : lockers are protected by padlocks, that the kids manage to break
Wreck
Boat : they get back their craft boat or motor boat
Propeller : or equip it with some kind of propeller / motor so they can make it offshore
Separated : as the group manage to break out of the sinking ship, they got separated in the sotmr
Swim : after having lost sight of his friends, the boy tries swim to the island
...
Isle
Beach : the boy wakes up on the beach, he stranded on the island
Search: the boy looks up on the beach seeking his mates possibly stranded too
Monster : when an marine monster, crocodile like and dark, emmerges from the sea roaming around the beach
Hide : the boy stays hidden, and heads to a wooded area
Forest
Forest : the boy starts going deeper within the forest on the island
Cameras : when he noticeds a strange object on a tree, a surveillance camera monitoring the island, hidden in the trees
Traps
Trap : while approaching one of these cams, the boy sets a trap on
Zones : there are trapped zones on this island ; dart shooters, spike pits
Dectectors : these cams serve as movement detectors
Cameras : the boy cannot enter the forest because of these cameras
Monsters : nor leaving the beach because of the sea monster(s)
Slingshot : le garcon crafts a sling or slingshot, with which he shots the camera to break them
Tree
Forest : the then goes deeper within the island
Herbs : when a noise catches his attention, while hidding in tall grass
Survivors : apparently hes not alone, other survivors from the wreck stranded on the island
Trunk : then on the moment he sees one of his friends, standing near an hollow tree trunk on the ground
Sap : a blue glowing substance oozes from the trunk, like honey or sap
Contact : the dude touches this substance, as if absorbing it with his hand, before going away from the trunk
Strenght : he then flies into the air, leaping like crazy, before disappearing into the woods
Face : on his face an expression of horror, as if he wasnt human anymore
Left : once gone the hidden boy approaches the trunk to see its content
Void : but its gone, as if its once friend had absorbed all of it
...
Monster
Reedbed
Beach : then sounds start being heard near the beach
River : the boys walks down a small river or stream leading to seaside reedbed
Reeds : the boy hides again behind reeds near the water
Others : the boys sees two of his friends in the water
Fishing : the two kids are catching fish in the middle of the reedbed
Monster
Monster : when some kind of crocodilian / amphibian dragon, hidden within the reeds, starts roaming around in the same waters
Ambush : behind the two kids unaware, who didnt see the marine beast
Slingshot : the boy grabs his slingshot and fires at them, trying to warn them
Noise : while trying not to make any noise, as hes also close enough to get attacked as well
Massacre
Attack : one of them recieves a shot in the head, whose scream makes the beast jump out of the water, grabbing the other one, devouring it
Shot : the boy shoots a second stone on the first kid, only noticing his friend being eaten alive
Escape : the kid gets away across the water toward the beach to escape the beast
Chase : the creature starts chasing him, jaws covered in blood
Trap : the boy with the slingshot lures the beast into a trapped area, making it fall to a spike pit
Death : the beast finds itself pierced all over, meeting its end
...
Kids
Reunion : back on the beach, the boys ends finding the other kids
Changed : but their behavior seems changed
Surf
Surf : on the way he sees one the kids surfing behind the rocks
Mocking : the surfer starts mocking him in the distance
Bully : being a bully hes got not a fan of, the boy slingshots a stone in his foot
Fall : the fat surfer kid then falls from his board, caught by the waves
Camp
Camp : the group of survivor somehow made a camp near the coast
Groupe : they are a group of seven, now six with the one killed by the beast
Infected : the group has been infected by some kind of substance or virus on the island
Game : their only hope of survival is to participate in the deadly games on the island
Cure : to obtain the antidote or antivirus and lengthen their life²span
Plan
Plan : the group plan to infiltrate a base, acting as the command center supervising the game
Base : some kind of military complex installed in the heart of the island
Prisoners : so they can free the other kids, prisoners of the supervisors
Cure : and find a definitive cure against this deadly poison
Night : however as the night passes by whie they organize their plan around a campfire
Light
Light : a blinding light irradiates the sky, stuning all the kids
Thunder : all kids of the survivor group end struck by some kind of lightning and fall stone dead in the sand
Survivor : only one kid rises among the dead, the boy
Girl : from this light descends a silhouette in the shape of a little girl (or a old lady)
Chains : she comes for the slingshoter boy, as the chains him up with chains of light
Take : and takes him away to another place, another world
...
Darkness
Corridor : the boy ends up along the girl walking inside a dark corridor, like a surreal underground
Gardian : she explains being the guardian of the island, keeper of all creature living on it
Stairs : she leads the boy deep down an immense stairway, covered in thick mist
Punishment : the explains she cannot accept his crime (sin ?), and for that the boy must be punished
Judgment : he must be judged, for having killed an inhabitant of the island
Aging : the more stairs they walk down, the more the girl in white dress starts to look like an old lady in black shroud
Well
Well : they arrive down the botton of the endless stairwell, with a its end a hole / well of pure darkness
Will : “Do you have a last will ?” / “A last will my dear ?”
Push : she doesnt gives him time to speak / respond and pushes him into the well ; she pushes the boy into the hole down the stairwell
...
Return
Wake : the boy wakes up, on a country road, avoid of any presence
Body : with a new appearence, he wakes up with another body
Cross : walking to a crossroad, or a gas station, where cars can be seen
Way : he asks his way disoriented, the mind still foggy after his experience
Mad : the local people start to think hes crazy
Anger
Anger : the boy starts to be taken over by anger, while not knowing whats happening to him, nor what happened to his friends
Power : somehow he developped some kind of power ; making objects fly around in his wrath, as well as flying into the air himself
Coast : as he flies over the hills, and arrives near the coast, somehow he reappeared back on the continent
Flight : the boy then takes flight, and rushes over the sea to reach the island again
RECALL V2
Chaos
Flight : the flying disfigured boy finds the island again, heading to the mountains
Complex : for there was a complex in the mountains, some sort of military base
Secret : a base of operationg where the crooks behind all this madness would be keeping the secret of the island
note : in the original version we dont know how the boy learned about it, he had some kind of vision ?
Assault
Assault : the boy arrives on the island, assaulting the complex in the mountains
Agents : men in black come out of nowhere from around the island
Airs : some with strange power, flying like the boy to confront fury in the airs
Explosions : explosions / impacts / shockwaves resonate in the air
Infiltration : the boy manages to lose them while entering the main building with a bang
Complex
Base : the boy infiltrates the base in the mountains at the top of the island
Complex : le boy explores the underground complex / research center
Sabotage : he breaks into the base and sabotages the surveillance system
Prisonners : freeing his friends still emprisoned out there
...
Core
Core : the boy then makes his way to the central room, at the heart of the complex
Silos : he starts to knock over large silo like fuel reservoirs from what looks like a reactor, using his power
Explosion : then a fiery explosion storms followed by an earth quake
Ruin
Door : a gigantic wall reveals a large stone door, like ancient ruins
Decorated : with some wall decorated with ornaments or fiery runes
Creature : the wall breaks appart with behind portion of an enormous flaming creature, reminding a dragon
Eruption : the island starts to erupt
RECALL V3
Hole
Seeress : the boy was gone to see a seeress
Trapdoor : she opened a trapdoor / under his feet, she threw him inside
Torture : inside he suffers all kinds of torture, a sort of personal hell
NOTES
INFOS
Titres :
- The Forbidden Island / The Cursed Island
- The Crystal Island / The Isle of Crystal
Index :
- 04#102
CHARAS
CHARAS
Boy : boy of the beach; accompanied by a group of kids, motivates the group to go explore the island
Boy / Power : (after waking) the boy's body is filled with power, like a flux flowing through his body
Storm : as if the boy was animated by the storm, animé par le pouvoir de la tempête, commanding wind and thunder
Wind : makes obstacles fly around in shock waves
Flight : the boy uses this wind to fly
Children / Kids : kids of the beach ; going to explore the island
Monsters : monsters of the isle ; some monstruous reptiles
Dragons : aquatic dragons with dark skin, amphibian dragons
Bay : monsters swiming near the bay
Girl / Ghost : ghost girl, crystal girl, guardian of the island
Form : girl with long white hair coming down the sky
Boy : she takes the boy into the dark corridor
Old Lady / Hag / Seeress : alternate form of the girl
CHARAS V2
Agents / Isle : agents of the isle ; men in black, guarding the complex on the island
Powers : certain have power, like flying through the air
Agents / Continent : agents of the transporter; men in black, guarding the transporter on the continent
note : they were absent in the original version
Supervisors : supervisors of the game ; men in black serving as jailers for the kids
Seekers : seekers of the center ; adults who gathered children across on the island
Dragon / Dragon of the Isle : dragon of the door, dragon of the core
Dragon / Wake : the boy awakes a dragon sleeping in the heart of the island
ELEMENTS
ELEMENTS
Boat : kids boat, some small craft boat or old wooden boat, the boys use to reach the island
Tree : Blue Tree, crystal tree, ether tree
Form : seeminly normal tree, but inside the bark looks like a geode of blue crystals
Liquid : geode oozing a blue crystalline liquid, like glowing blueish honey from a tree hollow
Sap : tree that secretes a blue crystalline glowing sap
Tree / Trees : the tree would be unique, or there would be many trees like this on the island ?
Trees : crystal trees, ether trees
Sap : trees that secrete a blue crystalline glowing sap
Sap : blue sap, crystal sap; Orisap, orichalcum sap
form : blueish crystalline liquid, viscous crystalline liquid substance
Heal : with healing properties
Power : grants power, or random powers
Trees: sap growing naturally in the trees on the island
Trunk : blue substance inside a tree trunk, like honey
Sap / Ether : this glowing sap would some a kind of liquid ether
ELEMENTS V2
Transporter : heavy vehicle in which the kids are transported
v2 kids : agents transporter, vehicle that takes the kids on the ship
Propeller / Inflatable Propeller : sort of mini buoy with a pair of handlebars,
driven from water surface, like water bike, allows to swim faster in the water
Sling / Slingshot : boy's weapon, on the island
Totems / Idols : statues, sculpted wooden idols; isle artifacts; contain crystals
Cameras : surveillance cams scattered on the island; surveillance system of the island, hidden in the trees and flowers
Traps : traps of the ile; spike pits, fosses de pointes, poison gas
Trees / Machines : cybernetic trees, modified to produce ether
Orichalcum : modified trees containing orichalcum based elements
Crystal / Orichalcum : material / crystal growing naturally on the island
form : rock / crystalline rock, composing the crystals / natural stones on the island
form : crystals of glowing blue / cyan light
Ether : orichalcum metal would be capable of channeling ether
Crystals / Jungle : jungle crystals, crystals growing in the jungle, like plants / fruits
Crystals / Monoliths : large crystal monoliths, massive crystals used like totems or radio towers
Energy / Mana : energy of the island, power of the island ; mysterious power that runs through the island
Ether / Eiter : Light of the Island; flow of blue / cyan light, abstract energy that runs through the island
power: power of the island, abstract flow of energy that manifests on the island, manifested by the crystals
powers : a substance that makes see the future and communicate with the dead
LOCAS
LOCAS
Beach / Continent : beach where the kids are at the start
Island : Crystal Island, Forbidden Island, Isle of the Well
forme : tropical island
crystal / crystals : island where crystals grow
monsters : wild island inhabited by monsters
power : the island would contain a strange power
kids : islands where children are taken to be transformed into monsters
tech : the island would contain some strange technology
Beach / Island : island beach
Forest / Jungle : island forest
Glade / Tree : glade of the trunk ; glade where a kid touches the blue sap
LOCAS V2
Castle : castle in ruins on top of the island
Complex / Base : complex of the island; military base
Base : a sort of military complex installed in the heart of the island
Mountain : base in the mountains on top of the island
Underground: where the underground complex is located
Surveillance : control center of the surveillance system on the island
Agents : where the agents watching over the island are stationed
Complex / Center : research complex, research center
Underground : underground complex, research research center
Reservoir : orichalcum / ether reservoir
Prison / Children : children prison ; place where children of the island are imprisoned
Experiments : place where experiments are made on the children of the island
Seekers : within adults had gathered children stranded on the island
Material / Crystal : to test the properties of a hazardous material / of the island crystals
Power : and make them awaken powers
Complex / Mine : the complex would have a mine to extract the ore / mineral
Deposit / Cristal : deposit of crystal / orichalcum / ether
Core / Reactor : geothermal reactor in the center of the complex, near the magma chamber of the volcano
Core / Reactor : heart of the island, reactor of the island, crystal reactor, mana reactor, ether reactor
Silos : reactor silos, sort of fuel reservoirs
Door / Eye : an immense stone door, behind which can be seend a gigantic demonic eye
LOCAS V?
Darkness : abstract place, separate from the world
Corridor / Shadow Corridor : corridor of shadows, dead corridor
Stairs : stairs of darkness, long stairwell that descends into the depths of nowhere
Well / Dark Well : Shadow Well, Well of Shadows ; at the bottom of the stairs lies a well, a hole in the deepest darkness, in the depths of darkness
Darkness : down there a whirl of thick black mist that plunges into the void
Hole / Hole of the Seeress : shadowy well kept by an old lady / hag
VERSIONS
- Children Island : version focused on the kids and the oddities they find
- Crystal Island : original version, where the kids explore the island, and the chaos that follows
elems : travel to island, marine monsters, cursed trunk, ghost girl, dark stairs ; return on island, air assault, fire beast
note : Recall V2 is a mix between Guardian Island and Complex Island - Guardian Island : version developping the monsters and the ghost girl
adds: monster hunt, sling shot, monster killed, punishmend of the guardian - Complex Island : version développing the complex and the agents
adds : children capture, sea ship, death game, stealth cameras - Forbidden Island : another version imagined with Axem, going on an isle to save Mina, locked inside a castle
THEORIES / EXPLANATIONS
Children / Slaves : his friends had become slaves of the island
Nectar : because of the blueish nectar giving them strength and power, but turning them into corpse like monsters
Monsters / Idols : the island monsters would be sculpted wooden idols given life
Ether : totems granted life with the power of the island / ether of the island
Monsters / Children : the island monsters would be ancient children transformed by the blue nectar / power of the island ?
Girl / Seeress : the ghost girl would be the old seeress
Punishment : the seeress condamns the boy for having killed the guardian of the island
Bannished : the boy is banished in another world / reality, where he has been disfigured
Seeress / Powers : powers of the seeress
Wish : the seeress uses the wishes of the children to keep her youth
Dreams : she devours their dreams and hopes, and by abandonning their dreams, she becomes young again
note : mistyped "esproits" in french, corruption of "espoirs et esprits" (hopes and minds)
Hole of the Seeress / Well of Wishes : the hag hole would be a wishing well
Complex / Light : the center was meant to cultivate the "light of the island"
tests : to make experiments by exposing test subjects (children) to it
games : and participate to barbaric games, making the infected gifted with power fight against each other
weapon: to test a new type of warfare
LIENS / CONNEXIONS
Stories
- Isle of Memory / Voyager's Archipel : link with the Isle of the Voyager
cf : 02#103 - Isle of Memory - Dragon Island : link with the Dragon Island / isle of the gray dragon
cf : 10#073 - Dragon Island - Isle of Axem / A3 : a strange island Axem would explore, with one of Arxe's bases
- Carnage Island / A4 : isle where the students of the academy get taken for their final test
Elements
- Transporter / Cerberus : heavy vehicle to transport the students / agents / soldiers
v3 students : student transporter, academy vehicle ; note : link with the cerberus academy - Ghost Girl / Back : this girl had appeared in [BACK] as guardian of the candy factory ?
note : THE KEEPER OF THE CANDY FACTORY WOULD THE SEERESS ??? - Complex / Center : possible link with the center of arxe
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